Wednesday, November 29, 2006

Cold Comfort

A wet blanket
clings with clammy fingers
cold and creeping
on naked skin,
kicking only causes
these wet claws to cleave closer
Call out, but the cold cover
collects your cries
in its callous clutch
Curl up, but the carpet's
condensation clamps uncomfortably
close, crawling slowly across the skin
Arctic cool scratches your insides
like collapsing crisp ice crumbling into
glacial cracks, cravenly piercing past skin
and flesh into your collapsing core.

2 comments:

Jono and Janice said...

Cleverly craftd comments, John.
It took me a long time to work that line out.

John den Boer said...

Thanks Jono,
I would try to alliterate something back, but I just can't think of anything.

Who deh?

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